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Study School Trip to Hiroshima
Among my a lot of memories at this study trip, the visiting to the Hiroshima Peace
Memorial Museum and the Atomic Bomb Dome became the most impressive
experience. Why was the visiting so important for me?
Although I have visited Hiroshima prefecture several times ever, It was my first
time experience to see the atomic bomb museum.
Since I saw Mr.Obama made a speech last year when he visited
there and offered flowers at the cenotaph for the atomic bomb victims
as a United States president for the first time, I have wanted to go
the museum and see the background of the tragedy history.
I felt the around of the memorial park was beautiful and peaceful , while
the inside of the museum was totally different. I felt cool wind there and saw
unbelievable misery and disaster scene. I could not understand such a tragic
scene happened in real world Hiroshima just 70 years ago.
I thought it was important to visit the museum at high school trip. At the
accommodation at that date, I talked with my class mates about
the events we experienced the day. We also talked about the atomic bomb
Off course opinions and impressions are different depending on the person.
However I thought it was very important to share important events and
study with the same age classmates.
The actual study with classmates will make our experience more valuable
and expand our view in the future.